I had to improvise a custom move for a raid in a village. The Huscarl took the Child with him on the raid as a rite of passage. I gave them this custom move for the raid.
Roll + young, on 10+ take 2, on 7-9 take 1
Take the village (must take twice to conquer the village)
Distinguish yourself with honor
Protect the other from suffering terrible harm
Protect yourself from terrible harm
I asked them to roll and make their choice in private.
The Child chose Take the village.
The Huscarl chose Take the village and… Distinguish yourself.
We all expected he would protect the Child.
The Huscarl survived the suffered harm.
The Child died. Rolled a 3.
What do you say, was it a bad custom move?