Another skin by myself and my friend Steven Pope in a collaboration to bring a new take on co-dependency. Different than the Mortal, the Golem is guardian, friend, and lover all in one.
Another skin by myself and my friend Steven Pope in a collaboration to bring a new take on co-dependency.
Another skin by myself and my friend Steven Pope in a collaboration to bring a new take on co-dependency.
There’s some interesting stuff there, but several moves need to be rewritten so that they follow the “normal” conventions.
You are right, the Word of Life needs to be better written up and edited, and the description of the Golem should be set up better.
Being told to choose a master in the Background section, and then again in one of the mandatory moves is also confusing. If you pick a master as part of assigning Strings, you don’t need to say it again as part of the move.
I’m also not terribly keen on the sex move. Why cap the number of masters at two?
Capped at two for the tug between two forces and the choice of which master to harm when the Darkest Self comes on. And to avoid master quadrangles.