Concept for The Doomed that I want feedback on: she’s a young, unwilling Bride of Totally-Not-Dracula, and she…

Concept for The Doomed that I want feedback on: she’s a young, unwilling Bride of Totally-Not-Dracula, and she banished him in a way that isn’t permanent. Her powers let her turn into a terrifying bat creature and mesmerize people, but she feels the pull of the Master in her blood, and he gets closer to reforming his body from mist by the day. Her Sanctuary is the burnt-out ruin of his mansion, on the outskirts of town.

I wanted a Doomed that doesn’t just have the usual demonic “this is Raven with the name changed” vibe.