Hi folks, I’m new to this community – but I figured it might be the right place to post this. (Please redirect me if I’m wrong.)
I’m working on a game called Odys|SE, it is kinda PbtA, but it takes a wider leap than a lot of the (amazing) stuff out there.
I just started to work on the Character Document (playbook-ish). Most of the rules are included. Now I would really love some feedback. (I fancy me abled to deal with vivid criticism.)
– on rules
– on layout
– especially: on language and word choice (I’m not a native speaker)
I’m planning to create a beta-test-scenario with comments on the rules and educating them.
https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/u/15427036/odys_se_beta_charsheets.pdf