I wrote my first mystery, hopefully going to be running it this weekend for a group of first time MotW players.

I wrote my first mystery, hopefully going to be running it this weekend for a group of first time MotW players.

I wrote my first mystery, hopefully going to be running it this weekend for a group of first time MotW players. 

I would love some feedback if anyone wants to take a look at it.

http://goo.gl/d8WlFB