I just finished reading this over the weekend and I think it is excellent and looks like a lot of fun to run.
My main comment is about the lack of a blank set of character sheets (or a single sample one) in the rule book.
My printer died the other week so I was doing it without printed character sheets and I found following the marks/advancement stuff a little confusing. I know i could have looked at the pdf or something but I found that it was something missed and i felt that i needed to be in the rule book.
I guess my only other request would be a few more pages of example gm moves, events and plot ideas.
I think everything else flowed really well and this really fired my imagination.
(Ive been thinking of running a series of rpg stories hopping round ww2 and books like this get my creative juices flowing. Great work!)
Finally and most importantly…. has anyone found a subtitles file for the 1981 russian movie mentioned in the bibliography? Just asking… nooooo reason…… 😉