I really want to get Slasher to the next round, so I can get it proofread by outsiders.

I really want to get Slasher to the next round, so I can get it proofread by outsiders.

John Layton, can we go through and add trigger statements to all the moves. It is the one thing they are missing.

“When X happens, roll+Y” or “When you do X, you gain Z bonus”

A lot of the moves are missing that clear, you have to do this fiction statement to get the ability to trigger the move. I understand we get it, but let’s spell it out for others.

Anton Dominic, can you help trim that last set of descriptions as you did with the first set?