I’ve also been working on the intro comic and would love to hear peoples’ thoughts on it. I used a larger font than will be used in the comic (about 20% bigger than normal comics) and there’s still a bunch of text, so I’m going to try to trim it down some more. The layout is mine and just for visualizing how much text there is – Jonathan will obviously do a far better job (particularly with page 2 imagine!).
The concept is to have it come after the list of terms, and to have some reference sheets in front of you when reading (if you want to create a character along with it) but mostly just for getting an idea of the system and how it plays so I’m more interested in that feedback – do you think it’ll be fun and useful – especially to someone just sitting down to grok the system and wants a comfortable read in a format they know and love.
alternate link: https://app.box.com/s/hvcpiya3apwmke8ys2xg