2 thoughts on “Ever since finishing the manual, I’ve been cooking up this idea.”

  1. Nice work! The Heat questions are perfect.

    I would move the Faction thing from being a discrete move to part of the Heat section, I think. “Accompanying each other to the ring” isn’t really a big enough exception to need a whole Move for it, to me, since in play ad hoc factions tend to form naturally.

    I generally advise folks to see if they can condense the initial Moves list, but these are all really on point! Enforcer might be a little less interesting than the others to me if you’re looking for something to cull.

    But yeah, this is great!

  2. Good job!  A couple minor nitpicks:

    I think the botch on Call Enforcer should be chosen by the opponent/creative.  

    Also Strength in number seems a little too powerful.  (I know, I know; who cares)  I would get rid of the momentum gain on a partial and change the steal momentum to gain momentum on a success.

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