Okay, so one more tiny little skin, The Zombie. Which is all about being a nigh unkillable rotten corpse / that teenage feeling of being in a big gang but still being ever so lonely.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1sGokgBPGk_-uBtyMftNUjs_ViSv68OmvBmNmCJ3Yrb0/edit?usp=sharing
1. Is the move “Herd” or “Horde?”
2. The fact you have “I can only take damage one specific way” is gamebreaking.
3. This is a monster, not a teenager.
I don’t see a lot here that you couldn’t do with a Ghoul who took the Queen’s move as an advance.
Also “Into the Fold” lets you give people a condition with a roll, which completely breaks the string economy. Normally a string or roll lets you place or remove a condition.
Thank you for the help Adam Goldberg, it was a bit of a rush job, it just seemed like a fun idea to have the zombie be all about getting lost in a larger group.
I’ve made a couple of changes, but she might be a lost cause.