4 thoughts on “I’m interested in feedback on this as a Monster of the Week mystery format…”

  1. Really good one and pretty easy to drop in game. The Midnight part of the main countdown sounds a bit crowded and more like a new clock by itself.

    Need to google what islamic graveyards look like – thats new one to me. 🙂

    Great work!

  2. I really like the format you’ve got going here. I have a bunch of Mysteries written and your sheet hits all the main points. I often stall out on bystanders and such, so more like this would be cool. Also, cool to see you running with the custom moves and countdown details for the magic item in the story. I need to put mine together and share them. This gave me some great ideas to make them better, first. 

    Anyway, nice work!

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