Hi all

Hi all

Hi all,

I would like to share my view on page 88, Clearing conditions:

“At the end of any scene in which you take the corresponding action, clear

that condition”.

This statement confuses me. After re-reading and thinking about it, I think it is confusing because it is not written as a set of Moves (“When ….”).

Here is how I would rewrite this part:

“When you take one of the following actions, while having the corresponding condition marked, surround the mark with a small circle” (actually means you mark the condition for clearing)

(here, the list of actions and corresponding conditions)

Then, another Move:

“When the end of the scene is reached, if you have conditions marked for clearing, clear them”

Any thought on this ?