So here goes my first version.

So here goes my first version.

Throw comments or violent reactions at me! 😛

(you can also use the Comment directly in the document, it’s easier to track when it’s specific).

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1gT_0yN9ncJHit0aXl3IEa7QtdfrKcox4jG4RHg5Q0Wk/edit?usp=sharing