I wrote my first MOTW story, feedback appreciated!

11 thoughts on “I wrote my first MOTW story, feedback appreciated!”

1. Nice! Let us know how it turns out!

2. This is great! And I love the way it’s organized.

3. Brian Wille Thank you so much! ♥

4. Rob Bush Thank you! ♥

5. I really appreciate the use of Google Maps at the end. I will definitely be trying that out to increase immersion.

6. Looks great!

7. One small thing: the countdown should list events after the hunters begin investigating. Your day & shadows entries don’t belong (they’re the hook, really). Your “dusk” entry should be the first one.

8. Additional: the actual mystery looks solid 👍

9. Michael Sands I changed the countdown 🙂

10. Shelby Berti the secret about that is that it means you can put in more horrible stuff that they have to prevent happening…

11. Very well done, and well laid out. Lots of good stuff there! I had been considering a different wendigo angle, I’m glad to see someone else use the beast!

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